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Grimalkin's avatar

Just finished this so I can continue on to part 2, and I really enjoyed this dark scenario. Having grown up with a British mum and lots of BBC mysteries, I was already acquainted with the foul talk.

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Sharron Bassano's avatar

I have spent a good deal of time in the UK, but never in this milieu, obviously. You set me down right in the middle of them and I was chilled to the bone. What a terrible scene in which to "live" one's life. Your ominous recurring motif of the sickening sweet dead "flowers" creeped me out. Nice job, FBJ!

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Forkbeard Jon's avatar

Thank you, Sharon. Coming from you that genuinely means a lot :)

Small town life can be pretty Hobbesian anywhere, I guess. But it does have a specific accent in England.

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Sharron Bassano's avatar

It surely does. It is just as varied and irreverent in Scotland.

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